squirrelpatties's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I missed vore day but whateves]

im the only one in my friend group who put actual effort into their vore day submission and i think that says more abt me than all of u

DUCKT0PIA responds:

I would've made a good vore pic ( Can't believe I just typed that )
Buuuut I wanted to be silly and make a reference to those Sonic vore videos lol

[Cass n Nene]

MY GIRLS

smallphroge responds:

HELL YEAAHHH

[Cleaning ol’ Betsy]

LOVE IT! the way you stylize her is toony and lovely! <3

SparkyChompers responds:

Thank you!
I try finding ways to exaggerate, but not too much. It makes drawing more fun for me ^^

[Hot ass summer]

VERY NICE! though id pull back the rains on the hair lighting effects and use a different background, its pretty distracting
but other than that, MWAH! great

SparkyChompers responds:

Ah I’m glad you like it ^^
Yes, I could have tone down the lighting on the hair a tad bit
For the background, I’ll TRY finding a simple, less distracting bg. Thank you so much for the feedback!

[My art work of cassandra from pico's school]

this art is so fundementally flawed on literally every level i genuienly have no idea how to criticize it but ill try
1- dont use the fill tool and if you do PLEASE color in the white spots left behind
2- clean up your line art, I shouldn't be able to see cass' head through her hair
3- cool it with the airbrush it looks awful
4- look up some anatomy references and learn to break down the body into basic shapes
5- look up a skeleton and break it down
6- put more effort into the backgrounds, her feet aren't even on the ground
7- idk what's even going on with the guy in the back
6- learn proportions, cartoons dont have to look realistic but its good to have an understanding of how real world bodies look before trying to exxagerate them

overall I can tell you are very young so please dont let this discourage you from drawing in the future. you have the potential to be amazing if you work hard enough, ive improved tremendously in the last couple years and i still have a ways to go
if theres any advice i can give you its to keep practicing and dont skip the basics, guidelines, anatomy and proportions, references, color theory, caricature
all your friends buddy
just keep going

VojtaKosk responds:

Yeah thanks

[C A S S A N D R A]

WOMAN

Jelly-P responds:

WOMAN

[Cassandra Farts]

when i was a small child i went to a lake

Just-Circ responds:

same